Shallow Water 987 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Shallow Water 987

Rating: 4.8


MY silence crept forword like tin
soldiers, yelling, left, right.left, right,
MY barricades break into this derelict
paradise, leaving only chalky cement,
and a strange vision filled with love and
pain.
MY dream ends , and silence fills my
room again, but some thing is different,
some thing has changed..........

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allan James Saywell 14 October 2005

dont worry david i took care of the blob, i dont like people being nasty to my friends i gave you a ten for the tin soldiers Warm regards allan

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Alice Vedral Rivera 14 October 2005

I like this one a lot - your silence speaks to me. avr

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