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Shallow Water 987 - Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

MY silence crept forword like tin
soldiers, yelling, left, right.left, right,
MY barricades break into this derelict
paradise, leaving only chalky cement,
and a strange vision filled with love and
MY dream ends , and silence fills my
room again, but some thing is different,
some thing has changed..........

Comments about Shallow Water 987 by DAVID GERARDINO

  • (10/14/2005 8:25:00 PM)

    dont worry david i took care of the blob, i dont like people being nasty to my friends
    i gave you a ten for the tin soldiers

    Warm regards allan
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  • Alice Vedral Rivera (10/14/2005 5:55:00 PM)

    I like this one a lot - your silence speaks to me.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 14, 2005

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