Shame(96) Poem by VAIDYANATHAN.T. RAM

Shame(96)

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Why need to be ashamed,
Since shame is a nature in human life.
Why need to be ashamed,
Since no life without shame.
Why need to be ashamed,
Since shame is a great opportunity,
To go ahead better.
Why need to be ashamed,
Since victory is beyond the shame
and Shame is a lesson of victory.
Why need to be ashamed,
Since shame is an experience,
To rectify the mistakes.

Depression towards the shame,
Does not rectify.
Sucide towards the shame,
Will never gives boldness.
Anger towards the shame,
Will miss the optimism.

Fighting towards the shame,
Can rectify the problems.
Fighting towards the shame,
Can bring the boldness.
Fighting towards the shame,
Can create more ambitious.
Fighting towards the shame,
Can create new and better life.

Shame is like a fewer,
To be cured by rectification.

However,
Shame is a serious life.

Friday, July 12, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: shame
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 12 December 2019

Since shame is a great opportunity, To go ahead better. Why need to be ashamed, Since victory is beyond the shame and Shame is a lesson of victory. thinking over and philosophizing over shame. very fine poem. tony

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2019

(2) But if taken in the right spirit, it becomes an incentive for change, for newer opportunities and for a better life. In my opinion, 'shame' is not the proper term for the internal condition you have been articulating and talking about. Thank you so much. Why need to be ashamed... Since no life without shame. Since shame is a great opportunity... To go ahead better Since shame is an experience... To rectify the mistakes

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2019

(1) My dear friend, I have read this poem quite a number of times but, to be honest, I could not find it coherent. It doesn't make any sense. It talks about something similar to 'criticism' which may or may not be acceptable to a man.

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