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The human was created,
To vindicate the life,
Where the life maybe
Joy and sorrow,

The human was created
With good brain and body,
Now its within the human
To utilize in proper manner.

Instead of using good brain and body,
Human decides for suicide,
Why should then,
The human to be created,
The god who created had wasted a life
Where a human is incapable to vindicate.

Monday, October 12, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: suicide
Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2016

Suicide is NOT the answer! ! We still need to carry on! With faith and hope. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 14 October 2015

Verily, the life should be put to proper use by man Suicide is a rare case where the person commenting suicide undergoes abnormal psychic pressure, we see the farmers committing suicide when they find out they are totally helpless and the pain of suicide is less than the pain they are facing. My father committed suicide as he was the victim of delusion, and he found himself helpless. What I have experienced life makes me to quote Life is a trial of trials

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Really sorry

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A good message.Thankls for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 12 October 2015

This is a painful yet sensible commentary on the psychology of suicide. The matter has also been treated from a philosophical angle. Thank you Vaidyanathan ji.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 September 2019

A poignant piece of poetry.... thought provoking! The last stanza needs serious introspection....10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 September 2019

Life is a gift. We do not have the right to terminate it. A perceptive and insightful write with a meaningful message.

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Ryson Dsouza 02 February 2017

The Meaning of Life is made so very clear... The words are very refreshing to the reader, , Gods Efforts in creation and Mans choices to sustain together brings a wonderful living... Thanks for sharing...

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Mubeen Sadhika 19 October 2016

Good thought. Sounds rhythmic.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 May 2016

A great thoughtful poem, thanks for sharing.

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