Tuesday, December 20, 2005

Shapes And Things. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Small uneven circles;
my breasts.

Almond shaped windows;
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Two Lips
COMMENTS
aeda sea 30 January 2006

i agree with martin. wonderfull poem, dont ruin it with foul language.

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Martin A. Ramos 23 December 2005

Aglaee: Another fine poem. 2 verse lines which grow and progess as we read. One quip. The 'F' word. Reconsider it. Martin

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Valerie Chase 20 December 2005

truly amazing. it speaks clearly. very nice <3

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