She Could Not Wait (As It Is Meant To Be Read) Poem by Marcus McKinley

She Could Not Wait (As It Is Meant To Be Read)

Rating: 5.0



Daunted
Unwanted
Call of the haunted
In death my freedom
You stole for eternity

Soul mates
Meant to be
No one else could see
Our love possibility

Closer than close
Were we
So close
You were me
Why did you?
Peer pressure the issue?

Without you
I cannot be
I am hanging
Symbolically
Our names in heart
From our tree
Rope swing free

Hear my plea

Let me see

Let me free

Let me be
With thee




This poem should be read line 1 then line 2, line 2 then line 3, line 3 then line 4, and so on... not repeating at spaces.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pranab K Chakraborty 01 December 2010

I can't follow any new in your instruction of reading. What's new there? It's the general style of reading. Then! Anyway, may be there something special, I can't follow it. Secondly about the poem: The project of ropeless hanging is very innovative. And as a reader I am also very confused....how could it be possible and why and what the life wants to show the circus by taking away half part of the apple which was / is.... Closer than close / Were we / So close / You were me....... Overall a mystery dominates the whole. Written well poet. Good writing. Thank you. Regards, pranab 10+

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