Saturday, March 1, 2008

She Don’t Work Here Anymore Comments

Rating: 5.0

She sat alone
in front of her computer screen
hoping for some images to appear
and awaken her lost dream.
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David Harris
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Meggie Gultiano 05 March 2008

a very lonely but full of compassion..

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JoAnn McGrath 01 March 2008

bitter sweet longing...one will never know...did she find her true love..that sets the world aglow...or did she fade into the sunset...never to find her beau

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 01 March 2008

Well I hope she found the one, then i have always been a Optimistic one.. Andy 10

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Duncan Wyllie 01 March 2008

This is without a doubt one of the most touching reads I have read by you so far David A finely crafted peice, that stands well by its own merrit Love duncan X

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Alison Cassidy 01 March 2008

David this is a sweet and lonely story penned with compassion and pleasing repetition (like a chorus) . It has the feel of a melodrama without the shallowness of the music hall. I enjoyed this very much. love Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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