She Hides So Well Poem by amber hester

She Hides So Well

Rating: 2.7


Across the room
they seem to see
A smiling girl
who looks like me.

With two huge dimples
on each cheek
She laughs and talks,
and always speaks.

She's the girl they think
would have it all.
But inside her is
where tears fall.

Inside her mask
is where I dwell
This broken girl
she hides so well.

I try to wipe
her tears away
But they fall more
each coming day

She tries to laugh
when her heart breaks
But hurts with every
smile she fakes.

And inside her
is where I dwell
This hidden girl
i hide so well.

The girl that no one ever sees,
Behind a mask that looks like me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shekhar Joshi 24 December 2009

Inside the mask Is where i dwell This girl Hides so well This stanza struck me.., .. Deep and moving i must say..... Loved ur poem Keep rocking \m/

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Anjali Mandokhot 21 November 2007

hey so beautifully hidden......yet revealed..do read my 'Inside' i share same thoughts wid u there....wishes

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Brian Mills 12 November 2007

wowowowow......such a deep and emotional poem...i think all of us can relate to this one in some way! ! thnx for sharing! Brian~

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Aldo Kraas 12 November 2007

This poem is beautiful And you expressed your feelings very well

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