She Loved Flowers. Poem by Jcf Kennedy

She Loved Flowers.

Rating: 5.0


Those
Wind turned
Cups of Light

Hung
Like stars
Upon green vines.

Lilies
She said
Of the Valley.

Monday, October 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Hay(na) ku is a poetic form that requires a series of
ONE
TWO
THREE stressors divided by line.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 10 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Jcf. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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