She Rained On My Ashes Poem by Chuy Amante

She Rained On My Ashes

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she was my best educator
she was in my face
she was in front and behind
she rubbed me wrong
so that I would wake up!
she allowed me to see
she was not the problem

having opened my
hazel eyes I
had an awakening I
had been the one who
had
held up the dissolution of my
hell

elevated I was
ever seeing what was me, its
elements
evaporated
effulgent, complete, Oneness
effect and cause
each one
each won
each ONE

Monday, November 2, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvina Germain 02 November 2015

A mentor of perfection, someone whose love is always apparent even when we want to do something else, the encouragement and determination put forth on their part is a gift and we ought to appreciate and be thankful...Weonderful poem.....

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