She Said That I Was Funny Comments

now i plan to put this into my upcoming February 2019 showcase of poems, to be found in my list of PH poems. Thanks! bri (:

See if she thinks THIS is funny! ! ! Wrap big bars of steel around her, as she rejects your arms of steel. In a few months all she'll do is purr... but no longer, for her, love you'll feel. bri (: Could yours be a true story about YOU, i wonder. hmm? could be about lots of us.

sorry, but your last line brought laughter to me. [i guess i'd 'forgotten' that you said the 'same thing' in line #2.] but i read your bio and i DID enjoy the poem quite a bit, so...you should be satisfied. :) some nice rhyming and rhyme scheme. i'm looking forward to reading one more from you his evening. to MyPoemList. bri (:

It so happens in the battle of love. Nice poem. Thanks.