She Said That I Was Funny Poem by Randy McClave

She Said That I Was Funny

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She said that I was funny
I wasn't trying to be,
Then that one hurtful remark
Brought me to my knee.
I had worked so very hard
As though she had inspired,
Then she gave me her response
But, not the one that I had desired.
I wrote with a divine feeling
As though she was my muse,
I was excited, happy and infatuated
My words and my soul did fuse.
I then looked upon my thoughts
The words that I had soulfully and passionately written,
Anguish and pain then came to my face
By a snake, I was seemingly bitten.
I wrote my words with an emotion
As those these words from a lover were spoke,
Her soul interpreted them differently
Was I then to her a joke.
I will not cut off a ear
To show the depression that she brought me,
She said that I was funny;
But, I wasn't trying to be.

Randy L. McClave

Wednesday, December 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: emotional,hurt
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 25 January 2019

now i plan to put this into my upcoming February 2019 showcase of poems, to be found in my list of PH poems. Thanks! bri (:

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Bri Edwards 15 December 2018

See if she thinks THIS is funny! ! ! Wrap big bars of steel around her, as she rejects your arms of steel. In a few months all she'll do is purr... but no longer, for her, love you'll feel. bri (: Could yours be a true story about YOU, i wonder. hmm? could be about lots of us.

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Bri Edwards 15 December 2018

sorry, but your last line brought laughter to me. [i guess i'd 'forgotten' that you said the 'same thing' in line #2.] but i read your bio and i DID enjoy the poem quite a bit, so...you should be satisfied. :) some nice rhyming and rhyme scheme. i'm looking forward to reading one more from you his evening. to MyPoemList. bri (:

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Rajnish Manga 12 December 2018

It so happens in the battle of love. Nice poem. Thanks.

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Randy McClave

Randy McClave

Ashland, Kentucky
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