Sahil Bangotra

Rookie - 186 Points (08-07-1993 / Jammu)

'She Took My Heart - Still In Search Of Her' - Poem by Sahil Bangotra

Once came a girl, like a butterfly.
Neither she knew me,   nor did I.
But what had happened
Is fault of her eye...! !
Those beautiful eyes just took my heart....! ! ! ! !

Inspite of that attitude,
She had that correctitude.
But what I liked the most,
Was her choice to be solitude.
That behaviour of her just took my heart.....! ! ! ! ! !

Deadly was her dimply smile,
Decent was her hairstyle.
Like others I too wished,
To walk with her atleast a mile.
That style of her just took my heart.....! ! ! ! !

She could never be mine, i supposed.
But the very next day she proposed
The unexpected feeling made me hear
A music very softly composed.
Her way of proposing just took my heart.....! ! ! ! ! !

We both were enjoying in bliss
Then she made a sweet wish
She came closer to me
And we were about to kiss.
That fragrance of her just took my heart.....! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

And  then i woke up
My dream just broke up
Neither was she nor that kiss
I felt my heart broken up.
Her incredible way of broking my heart took my heart too..! ! ! ! !

      '': (WE  NEVER MET: (''

Topic(s) of this poem: romantic

Comments about 'She Took My Heart - Still In Search Of Her' by Sahil Bangotra

  • (3/8/2015 4:19:00 AM)

    nice work, sahil, didnot know you did english poetry. this is a pleasant surprise.. keep up the good work (Report) Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (2/18/2015 2:17:00 PM)

    A lovely train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a beautiful love poem. A nice piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

    Sahil Bangotra (2/18/2015 10:16:00 PM)

    Thanks for appreciating.... I just developed intetest in poetry. hope I could do better in future. Thanks a lot..! !

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 17, 2015

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 17, 2015

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