Wednesday, January 31, 2018

She Was A Rainbow Comments

Rating: 4.9

she was a Rainbow.
Colourful specs lined gorgeous,
in organise display of her inner beauty,
casting a spell on his horizon.
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Ayandare Mayowa
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Dr Antony Theodore 12 October 2018

But she dimmed. oh! she dimmed. The anticipated end of the rainbow; the proverbial pot of gold faded....nothing lasts here on earth...... beauty comes and goes everyday...... nothing is permanent..... you hve very wisely written about it....... tony

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Cheryl Tutaan 31 January 2018

A rainbow that was faded, soon will bring colors again...😊 You would also like my Raindrops keep on Falling. Thank you. A big 10! Cheryl♡

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 January 2018

Very impressive write, Ayandare. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Rini Shibu 31 January 2018

It's really disappointing when the beautiful rainbow fades away.. Good one

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