Shemida Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Shemida

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Shemida, she, he, aid, aids, aide, him, side, aside, Sam, shade, same, made, dam, aim, aims, hide, hid, dams!
Like twelve springs of water and seventy palm trees seen around;
However, attention is the key,
Able to move you forward without any fear.

Saturday, May 21, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: serenity,trees,well,images
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 15 November 2018

Foward ever! ! ! With the muse of the truth. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Michael Walkerjohn 21 May 2016

Aloha Edward... Another jewel! Dr. Phil! The girlz in da hood? More Exodus? Elim? a further station? Frustrations abound! No individual of any mind... wants to be led around by that chain... attached to that ring... in their nose! Yes, everyone needs to open up to this attention thingy... and simply reach out and snatch that key from whom ever holds it! moving on forward... freedom... life without fear... Wondering just what it is that you fear? With all due respects... Again, one more fine offering... posted! All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two

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M Asim Nehal 21 May 2016

Unique, nicely thought...10

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