Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 714,697 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

A Better Place

Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Let us love this world and put it in a better shape than hate,
Let us share true love with one another to make the world go round;
For our negative actions will surely lead us to fights and wars,
But true love from us all will make the world a better place.


Comments about A Better Place by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/25/2020 11:50:00 PM)

    Nice poem.. let us make world a better place to live.. good poem..deserves 10(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (2/29/2020 2:47:00 PM)

    Righteous morals! !
    Righteous laws! ! ! !
    Works of peace and love.(Report)Reply

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  • Magadha RaniMagadha Rani (2/28/2020 10:58:00 PM)

    A wonderful sir! I am a new poetess in this site, please visit my one and only one poem at least once!(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (2/8/2020 4:09:00 PM)

    To shape the world with righteous morals! ! !


    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    Stay blessed always.(Report)Reply

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  • Michael WalkerMichael Walker (2/4/2020 8:42:00 PM)

    There is always a chance to make the world better. This morning I was struggling up Queen St. with heavy bags,
    when a stranger stopped walking downhill and carried the bags for me. She would not accept my offer
    of a tip. She made the world better for me.(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (12/23/2019 11:56:00 AM)

    Righteous morals! ! ! !
    True love,
    Sharing and caring for others without racism.

    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    Stay blessed always.(Report)Reply

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  • Magadha RaniMagadha Rani (12/23/2019 6:02:00 AM)

    Let us love this world and put it in a better shape than hate,
    Let us share true love with one another to make the world go round....lovely expression sir. A sweet poem. thank you for sharing....10++++++++(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (12/9/2019 10:05:00 PM)

    Positiveness! !
    Righteous morals! ! ! ! !
    Putting the world into a better shape.


    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    Stay blessed always.(Report)Reply

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (12/8/2019 9:14:00 PM)

    A wonderful write! Beautifully composed.....10++++(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (12/7/2019 3:58:00 AM)

    Positiveness! !
    The World needs peace than war!


    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    Stay blessed always.(Report)Reply

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  • Mamunur Rahman KayesMamunur Rahman Kayes (12/4/2019 3:47:00 AM)

    Let us love this world and put it in a better shape than hate........a very successful words(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (12/1/2019 4:43:00 AM)

    A better place with the muse of righteous morals.

    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    Stay blessed always.(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (11/8/2019 1:14:00 PM)

    Righteous morals,
    Righteous laws,
    Uplifting the truth! !(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (11/2/2019 5:52:00 AM)

    World's Peace! !
    Without hatred and war;
    Accepting all mankind without racism.

    Thanks for your comment on my poem.(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (10/23/2019 8:36:00 PM)

    True love! !
    Much needed,
    To make the World a better place.


    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    Stay blessed always.(Report)Reply

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  • Tamara Beryl LathamTamara Beryl Latham (10/22/2019 5:36:00 PM)

    What great poetic insight, Edward. Love always overpowers hate. Thanks for posting this wonderful poem. :)(Report)Reply

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  • Bernard F. AsuncionBernard F. Asuncion (10/21/2019 12:47:00 AM)

    A very significant piece, sir Edward......10++(Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (10/12/2019 1:50:00 PM)

    World peace! ! !
    With the muse of righteous morals.


    Thanks for your comment on my poem.
    Stay blessed always.(Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (10/10/2019 10:17:00 AM)

    true love from us all will make the world a better place. for peace. PEACE be unto ye all, No more wars, only Peace
    and Love. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem from your peaceful heart. God's Blessings Greatest be unto ye all.(Report)Reply

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  • A B Faniki (9/5/2019 9:12:00 AM)

    Well said. Love will surely heal the word. Thanks fod sharing such thoughtful piece(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 10, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 16, 2010