A Better Place Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

A Better Place

Rating: 4.7


Let us love this world and put it in a better shape than hate,
Let us share true love with one another to make the world go round;
For our negative actions will surely lead us to fights and wars,
But true love from us all will make the world a better place.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddartha Montik 19 November 2016

Indeed, it must be the consciousness of all of us humans to have it Live and Let Live.. and peace prevail! Thanks Edward for sharing this!

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Ramona Gerry 30 December 2016

Good view on reality... Thanks Kofi!

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Ravi A 07 January 2017

Everybody talks about true love but what is true love? Unconditional approach to people - can anybody do it? We have our own prejudices and to that degree, we really suffer. Who can love the entire world unconditionally? Countries cannot. Political parties cannot. People cannot. See, unity is in the heart of everybody but human intellect always discriminates. This is the main difficulty.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 18 February 2017

But true world from us all will make the world a better place. True words. Like Michael Jackson of blessed memory would say: ...heal the world and make it a better place for you and me and the entire human race...' Sylva

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Kathy Van Kurin 02 March 2017

Edward Kofi Lewis, It is so nice to be reminded of our purpose here in this life. Love this world.....Put in better shape then hate..........So true.share true love...the world go around. Oh yes and negative actions lead us to fights and wars Bless you, Kathy

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 October 2020

Positiveness! ! ! The truth much needed! Accepting all mankind without racism! ! ! ! Able to bring peace to the world. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 29 September 2020

It is the real love poem To love all And make the world a better place

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 July 2020

The world needs peace than war! ! ! Let us rather make the earth a better place; Without racism. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always in your land. Shalom!

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Nice poem.. let us make world a better place to live.. good poem..deserves 10

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 February 2020

Righteous morals! ! Righteous laws! ! ! ! Works of peace and love.

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