Shine On Face Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Shine On Face

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She is not lost forever
From mind or from elsewhere
She remains in uppermost mind
With all the honor of some kind

She used to grant
Whenever I wanted
Some guidance
Even by chance

She was a peak
In position to speak
On poetry
With gorgeous entry

She used to write
On pain with passion to ignite
One may feel it with little pinch
She was perfect with imagination by inches

She may say it with force
Poetry is to be felt as divine course
Not all people may love it by heart
Only you should be involved fully as part

I have followed her since
Even when she decided to leave at once
It was her decision for facing real life
As it was acid test and walk on razor edged knife

I shall love to remember
As an close member
Her each word by earnestness
As a result she has still shine on face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2013

She is not lost forever From mind or from elsewhere

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2013

Nice. James Mathews32 minutes ago You paint a very vivid picture! ! ! ! Nice job. Comment +1 a poem of always

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2013

Alan Green 'Guppyman'33 minutes ago the poet tells of all of a soul true to who they are

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2013

The rhyme is there but something is missing Arun N.K.33 minutes ago The rhyme is there but something is missing Comment +1 thoughtful

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2013

hurtstranger33 minutes ago very good analogies

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 September 2013

Catrina Trinidad I have read the poem and it is such an honor for me to have that fast posting of oeuvre of yours under my page.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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