Shoes Poem by Jon Alan

Shoes

Rating: 2.8


Like shoes void of a spirit
To bring them Life
The night is but a hollow
bewitching wife.
Rest, lonely traveler,
Take off your shoes.
Walk away from them in
stocking feet,
As the day walks away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 26 September 2007

Strong metaphor. You have a genuineness - very appealing. keep on SusxGLx

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Jon Alan

Jon Alan

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