Shoes Poem by Jon Alan

Shoes

Rating: 2.8


Like shoes void of a spirit
To bring them Life
The night is but a hollow
bewitching wife.
Rest, lonely traveler,
Take off your shoes.
Walk away from them in
stocking feet,
As the day walks away.

Tuesday, September 11, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: lonely
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Goldy Locks 26 September 2007

Strong metaphor. You have a genuineness - very appealing. keep on SusxGLx

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Jon Alan

Jon Alan

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