Friday, May 10, 2024

Shoo Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was a competent, happy housewife, but that was before my husband died,
Leaving me to rear myriad children solo, as the lone star twinkles with pride.

John had left us a prosperous farm, with a lovely home, shaped like a shoe;
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Excellent! Evelyn, you write poems as if from personal experiences. The images, tropes, rhyme-pattern, rhythm created by the use of the right words everything is so endearing about the poem. Loved it. Top score and added to MyFavourites

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Thank you so very much for your kind expressions. Your complimentary remarks are deeply appreciated. I am also proud to have a poem among your Favourites.

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