Tuesday, May 8, 2018

Should I? Or I Should! Comments

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My mind trembles when I heard the voice
of dark and light and sorrow and happiness.
I could not resemble the images of thy choice -
Nor could I remove out thy weaknesses.
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Joana Marie Ferry
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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 May 2018

Dear Joana, such a splendid write...10+++

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Should I? or I Should, is a question which will follow us to the end of journey.

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The Amused 08 May 2018

Too many thys. Needs better direction.

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I believe that we must be confident in expressing our true emotions. Words are just the instrument for expressing who you are.

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