Siblings Poem by Discreet Poetic

Siblings

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Siblings come in all shapes and sizes
There are many subjects you should think
When the golden sun rises
When they play tricks on you
They come back with more surprises

Right now you may think they are twerps
Or to stuck up or busy
But later in life you apriciate
All those hiccupps and burps

Most kids would give their brother or sister away
But I tell you people of earth. There will be a day
When the rain falls down hard and harsh
And there is no one to hold
You would do anything to recapture your childhood and behold

Again, siblings come is shapes and sizes
But they all have one thing the same
When they get on your nerves
Let the emotion out in a way that is tame
Heed these words now or fall in to eternal shame.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Siblings, a blessing and well, siblings are people. I love that you put yourself into another's sight and then write from that point of view, the view of someone with siblings. Good write!

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Decreetly Poetic 18 January 2008

I should let you people know that i dont have any sublings that is why i wrote this poem so to all those people who have syblings please feel lucky that you have someone.

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LOVEFOOL Aka 18 January 2008

nice work nice sentament keep it up

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