Sight Could Not Contain Him Comments

I think the elephant in the bag is the best thing happening here. It is the one ferocious image the mind can chew on. I like this poem.

Wow! John, this is amazing...the thought that within a man is the only place big enough for God...truly a wonderful thought. I don't like the image of stuffing an elephant into a plastic bag. While I know what you are saying, it lends a tinge of the ludicrous to the otherwise serious and magnificant poem. Raynette