Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Sight Unseen. Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are birds in dark masses,
Prior to migration.
Collecting in marshes,
On ploughed land or green.
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Fay Slimm
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Shashendra Amalshan 27 July 2009

hello Fay.. I just returned from Karin's ma'am page to your page.. she has written a beautiful new one too.... this so beautiful too fay... loved it... there some poets, which i just cant get enough of! ! ! ! with lv shan

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Bob Gibson 23 July 2009

Flying in 'V' formation, they depart our shore warmer climes by invitation, away from winters roar Hibernation is for some, the long winter sleep some people don't have a choice, its for them I weep A very significant poem Fay 10+

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Beautiful. absolutely beautiful....... very beautiful too.. beautiful

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C. P. Sharma 22 July 2009

There are people, who living Prior to meeting Instinctively knowing Such distance between Will never be barrier To love's culmination Of waiting with longing, Despite sight unseen. Goodness in Nature cultivates trust in humans far off. Wonderful poetry as usual.

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Lynda Robson 22 July 2009

Interesting concept Fay, lovely imagery as always, thanks 10 Lynda xx

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Fiona Davidson 22 July 2009

So much truth inside your wonderful imagery Fay...stunning piece...Fi 10+++

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