silent moon it sits and waits
oh the depth of which I cannot fathom
desperate toll and chasing wind
the sun left stranded in the night
silent moon, oh smile on me
silent moon, tonight
tonight
I like the imagery of a trapped sun. Have you thought of publishing this?
nicely and thoughtfully written...i like your use of repetition...
This is some nice writing. I like it a lot. It is unashamedly poetic. Just beauty.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That is a pretty good rhyme in this verse. Beyond that, I have a hard time determining what this is about. It is obviously a prayer to the moon, but for what reason or to what purpose. I suppose I'm supposed to guess. No can do. I like it layed out a little more. Oh well, still a good rhyme. GW62