Monday, January 23, 2017

Silently Loving You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Head pounding, eyes hurting, tears falling
For years now I'm left silently loving,
You're with me but your heart's with someone else,
All I can ever do is exist in your place.
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Shaira Bataga
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Shaira Bataga 24 January 2017

Thanks for the feedback guys. I appreciate it.

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Chinedu Dike 24 January 2017

Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth from inner recesses of the heart with conviction. An insightful depiction of the spiritual nature of love. Thanks for sharing Shaira.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 January 2017

Superb flow of emotions has made this poem too superb. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Sister Frances 23 January 2017

Your words are so filled with emotion but sometimes we have to realise that some people will always only be true friends that love is a mutual thing and you can't force those feelings onto anyone.10 ++++++

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