Silently Watch Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Silently Watch

Rating: 5.0


Love is special kind of attachment
Internal sacred movement
That evolves secret understanding
Between two souls for uniting

Love is not physical attraction
It is simple action
Of liking and disliking
That is suddenly striking

You may have inclination
Towards nature for fascination
It takes you early morning for walk
See the secrets and silently watch

Birds make you aware
To perform fair
That nature is so kind
Look around and never act blind

Such is kind peace message
That we remember through out age
New experience is inked on page
We love to act as an actor on stage

Love your self and see around
If something new can be found
That shall feel you with new meaning
That life is always meant to be winning

Tuesday, June 17, 2014
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Love is special kind of attachment Internal sacred movement

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Fascinating view on love Diana Pope2 minutes ago I loved the rhyme scheme for this poem and thought that it made it more interesting to read. The only thing I didn't like was the over simplistic use of words.

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Re: Silently watch (Score: 1) by morgen90210 on Friday, June 20,2014 (09: 00: 58) this is very good.I like it a lot

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A look in the mirror poetic style. 1 hour ago by just Arun | Reply

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Ur so hawt 9 minutes ago by Calamitee ZzZzZz (Cuz They be sleeping on Me) | Reply

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Well done Jasmine Love Ballentine4 minutes ago Lovely Comment +1

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VERY GOOD! BOSS LADY4 minutes ago keep writing Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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