Monday, August 3, 2015

Silver And Gold Comments

Rating: 3.8

I am just a silver, and you are gold.
You are a fiery star, while I am cold.
You warm humans, and I make them shiver.
You give them comfort, while I give them fever.
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Ishtar Trismegistus
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 September 2015

White as the roses that grows in the spring, The angels of God will come out and sing. When finally it’s time to become one; A total eclipse of the moon and sun. Wonderful imagination.. thoughts, symbols and your desire to be one.. merging into ............ a very good poem. you have a great future as young as you are, you have accomplished a lot God bless you

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Chinedu Dike 13 August 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely depiction of romantic relationship between the moon - Earth's satellite and the Sun. Thanks for sharing Ishtar. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Captain Herbert Poetry 04 August 2015

Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem. Ishtar Trismegistus

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Kelly Kurt 03 August 2015

A wonderful poem, Ishtar. Thanks for sharing Peace

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