Friday, August 7, 2009

Silver Lining Comments

Rating: 5.0

The softly whispered mulberry flatteries
Into those wanting ears of silkworm friends
Were reciprocated by means of their gracious nature
To spin me nets of sheer translucent finest silk
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Phillip Gallant
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Jesse Soto 07 August 2009

Setting up the reader for the simple point was genious! The diction, lavishly describes the true silver lining! Bravo!

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