Monday, June 16, 2008

Simple Smiles Comments

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she cradles the coffee cup,

savoring it’s warmth.
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Mike Sheriff
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Greenwolfe 1962 18 June 2008

This is quite good and understood. I love rhythm and rhyme. But when it comes to prose work, I give due credit as well. This is not great, but its better than good. I give it a 9. The story is well told. GW62

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