Simply By Seeing You Poem by Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India

Simply By Seeing You

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Simply by seeing you
I am satisfied.
Simply hearing you
And hearing about you
I am freed from
All kinds of fear.

Learn toleration
From a tree, dear.
Make yourself free from
All false prestige.
And be ready to give
Dues that belong to others.

Saturday, May 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life,truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jefferson Carter 20 May 2017

Gajanan, I like the toleration-tree lines. However, it's almost always better to show rather than tell, to use images rather than abstractions. Lines like Stay free from/All false prestige have little staying power. If you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC

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Gajanan Mishra 20 May 2017

Let us see the truth and live witout fear.

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Gajanan Mishra

Gajanan Mishra

Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
Gajanan Mishra
Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India now at Tapobana, Titilagarh, Odisha, India
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