Archana Prabahar


Sin - Poem by Archana Prabahar

Committing a mistake is common
but continuing it is the sin
Prefer not to continue rather
correct the deeds of wrong
Walk through the path of right
to reach the goal of success
Else the rocks of sin will hide
the breeze of good to pass by
And hence remain as barrier
in every deeds of efforts...


Comments about Sin by Archana Prabahar

  • (12/26/2008 12:26:00 AM)


    Else the rocks of sin will hide
    the breeze of good to pass by

    its resonating something i experienced recently
    so its a right timing to read ur poem
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  • (11/12/2007 12:41:00 PM)


    Rocks of sin and breeze of good are nice. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • (11/12/2007 12:08:00 PM)


    good observation - well said (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 12, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 24, 2011


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