Sinking In Summer. Poem by Fay Slimm

Sinking In Summer.

Rating: 5.0


When heat draws the sap
................. from pale blades of grass,
Crisps to brown
.......................all valiant stalks of corn,
Dries morning dew too soon
............................., and when sun's vat
Of broil defeats all
...........................by drowning the norm.,
Bring me relief.
................... Cool me with salt breezes
Fresh from the sea.
.................... Fan me with Autumn-time.


Quench me with prime berries,
............................ splashed with teasing
Wet gusts of white mist,
.............................which like bubbly wine
Will keep me afloat.
.................................. Sinking in summer
Means languid control,
.............................. which gives a listless
Need for great cooling draughts
...................................so work gets done.
To give summer it's head
............................................... is too risky.


Melting in summer's song,
...................................... most life abjures,
Yet bows as it sinks
.............................to sun's claim for more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 14 September 2009

Melting in summer's song, ...................................... most life abjures, Yet bows as it sinks .............................to sun's claim for more. A beautiful poem, Fay, but the last few lines are really good and meaningful...10/10.

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Catrina Heart 31 August 2009

wow Fay! ! ! So enchanting lines you have painted here..............10

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Carol Gall 30 August 2009

lovely verses and words beautifully written

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Tsira Goge 30 August 2009

Yet bows as it sinks .............................to sun's claim for more. ....................................................................... Fay, Beautifully... and logical season continuations... 10.... All the best, Tsira

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Ian Bowen 30 August 2009

Fay, I simply like everything about this piece of poetry. You are one of our very best.10/10 Regards, Ian

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