Sinking In Summer. Comments
When heat draws the sap
................. from pale blades of grass,
Crisps to brown
.......................all valiant stalks of corn,
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wow Fay! ! ! So enchanting lines you have painted here..............10
Yet bows as it sinks .............................to sun's claim for more. ....................................................................... Fay, Beautifully... and logical season continuations... 10.... All the best, Tsira
Fay, I simply like everything about this piece of poetry. You are one of our very best.10/10 Regards, Ian
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12/9/2025 11:57:39 AM # 1.0.0
Melting in summer's song, ...................................... most life abjures, Yet bows as it sinks .............................to sun's claim for more. A beautiful poem, Fay, but the last few lines are really good and meaningful...10/10.