Thursday, April 30, 2009

-sisters In Heart- Comments

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I used to look at you when you were small
Smile would find my face without a faint
I remember the moments when I held you tight
Thinking how adorable you were on my sight
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Maylene Galang
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Daryl Winkle 12 May 2009

Wow...the sisters' bonding is really intact! I can feel it, very expressive, full of emotions. I just read your other poem, it's beautiful too! I like your choice of words, seem like flying in the air, very imaginative. Nice job! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 30 April 2009

you are truly expressive and full of heart..touching write

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