Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Saturday, October 24, 2009

Sky Will Not Fall Comments

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Sky will not fall if I die
Nobody will shed tears and say good bye
Soul may have upward journey and fly
Death is certain and no one has to try
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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warner treuter 25 November 2009

Great concept and ideas, tightly packed; and yes, we do not have to try, and where we go no mortals can follow. Some one will miss you, though. Lots in this poem.

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Swatimalya Chattopadhyay 25 October 2009

It is more important to leave a legacy behind, while we leave this world.Swayed always by the materialistic purpose, we commoners do not leave any impact ultimately in the human minds and become quite dispensable during/after death.But can always improve our values a bit so that a comparatively meaningful stay takes place in human minds after our departure. Very nice poem, an eye opener.

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Kunwar Patel 24 October 2009

Sky will not fall if I die Nobody will shed tears and say good bye......superb write....10

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Milica Franchi De Luri 24 October 2009

We will miss your poems and your wisdom Hashukh, so don't say no one will shed tears and cry................i hope it 's not going to happen for a long time......... Good write...........thanks

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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