Sky will not fall if I die
Nobody will shed tears and say good bye
Soul may have upward journey and fly
Death is certain and no one has to try
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It is more important to leave a legacy behind, while we leave this world.Swayed always by the materialistic purpose, we commoners do not leave any impact ultimately in the human minds and become quite dispensable during/after death.But can always improve our values a bit so that a comparatively meaningful stay takes place in human minds after our departure. Very nice poem, an eye opener.
Sky will not fall if I die Nobody will shed tears and say good bye......superb write....10
We will miss your poems and your wisdom Hashukh, so don't say no one will shed tears and cry................i hope it 's not going to happen for a long time......... Good write...........thanks
Great concept and ideas, tightly packed; and yes, we do not have to try, and where we go no mortals can follow. Some one will miss you, though. Lots in this poem.