Saturday, June 15, 2013

Slave Of Freedom Comments

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Life like a kite fallen upon the thorny bush
Breeze that eases, gives me a painful push
‘Tis a dusky musky time, kids are around me
None dare to save but silently praying to thee
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Heather Wilkins 21 June 2013

whole life I loved to thee O freedom. nice write

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Wahab Abdul 15 June 2013

this is your wonderful poem... i like it very much....the first two is really excellent.. bravo

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Gajanan Mishra 15 June 2013

whole life I loved to thee, thanks. good write.

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