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Slowly I Die

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Slowly i die
Each breath i take
I pray will be my last
Depression has hit
And I fall into the darkness
What has happen to the smiles
The laughters of yesterday
No longer can i say
I'm ok i'm fine
Cause today I fell

I fell into an oblivion
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Nia Riz 15 September 2008

a very meaningful poem. good piece.

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K. Jared Hosein 28 February 2006

Somehow, I feel you wrote this from inside. I like it, Sunitria. Simple and sad. Anything written from inside is a masterpiece. I don't like rating 'art' because everyone has their opinion. But I liked this. Can't say for the billions other in the world. - K.J.

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