Slowly i die
Each breath i take
I pray will be my last
Depression has hit
And I fall into the darkness
What has happen to the smiles
The laughters of yesterday
No longer can i say
I'm ok i'm fine
Cause today I fell
I fell into an oblivion
I fell into a desperation for life
A fight I battle each day
Has taken its toll
And today i must say
I must admit
That it has won
And
Slowly I die inside
Somehow, I feel you wrote this from inside. I like it, Sunitria. Simple and sad. Anything written from inside is a masterpiece. I don't like rating 'art' because everyone has their opinion. But I liked this. Can't say for the billions other in the world. - K.J.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a very meaningful poem. good piece.