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Were I To Lose Her Now

Rating: 4.4

I met an old man
he ought to know
and he said,
"If you love her let her go."

You tell me, old man
to let her go.
Show me how
and I'll show you
furrows of joy.

Instead glands of sorrow
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Tuesday, October 16, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,love and dreams
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 03 March 2020

Dear Adrian, A CLASSIC poem resonates perpetually, so true, that's why I add this now to MyPoemList, thank you so much for having created this Classic (in my very eyes, sure!) poem, Adrian, I so admired the words in this Immortal poem. Thank you so much that I have known you through PoemHunter. God's Blessings in Abundance.

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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful piece of poetry nicely brought forth from the heart. Thanks for sharing, Adrian.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 November 2019

A beautiful poem is well executed. Thanks and congratulation for being selected this poem as the member poem of the poem of day

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Bill Cantrell 07 November 2019

Wow, emotions intertwined in verse after verse, a very beautiful poem! ! Congratulations for worthy poem of the day!

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Savita Tyagi 07 November 2019

Marvelous poem with amazing imagery. Pleasure of a loved one’s presence is felt in small things.

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Tamara Beryl Latham 07 November 2019

Each of us has his or her own way of expressing love with the poetic pen. Yours is unique. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on POD. : -)

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Anil Kumar Panda 07 November 2019

This is awesome write. Very clever use of words giving the poem a smooth flow. Loved it and congrats. 'But she is here; in her scent of neck hair nose buried deep safe to quell the sheer gut twisting fear.'.. is so beautiful.

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Harley White 07 November 2019

Strong poetic imagery well expressed...

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 November 2019

ut she is here; in her scent of neck hair nose buried deep safe to quell the sheer gut twisting fear... drems in love. a fine poem. tony

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 November 2019

A mesmerizing poem, so loveliest worded. This poem reminds me of my fav. poet Keats. He wrote: A Thing of Beauty is a Joy Forever, , so absolutely right. This is the second time your poem is chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, Adrian! Congratulations with this honour. A 10 Full score and a myriad of 10's more you so well deserved

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Adrian Flett 08 November 2019

Thanks Sylvia. I'm glad you remembered and enjpyed it again.

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Adrian Flett 08 November 2019

Thanks Sylvia, I'm glad you enjoyed it again.

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