Small Try Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Small Try

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• Anushka Ramchuran Thank you dear Hasmukh Mehta I am deeply honoured and humbled by this kindness. To all who liked and commented my sincere thanks and appreciation. Your words are beautiful Hasmukh ji, I hope I live up to each expression. Much love...anushka
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Small try

This is how women are to be raised
Bestowed honor and praised
We have kept them under bondage
But well. Now they have come up the age

Some of the top posts are occupied
By women and responsibilities are carried
It is only by dint of their skill and ability
That they have established already

Only writing is not enough
We behave very rough
Give them no patient hearing
And they all tolerate with brunt’s bearing

I have written several poems
Concerning them
I can read on their face
And find the hidden races

It is small try
With weak wings to fly
The sky is far off
But there is enough reason to laugh

Small Try
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2015

• Anushka Ramchuran Thank you dear Hasmukh Mehta I am deeply honoured and humbled by this kindness. To all who liked and commented my sincere thanks and appreciation. Your words are beautiful Hasmukh ji, I hope I live up to each expression. Much love...anushka. Small try This is how women are to be raised Bestowed honor and praised We have kept them under bondage But well. Now they have come up the age Some of the top posts are occupied By women and responsibilities are carried It is only by dint of their skill and ability That they have established already

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Rakhi Jayashankar 08 April 2015

It's really enthusiastic to see your respect for women Men who are chauvinistic should learn from people like you kudos

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2015

Chandra Prakash Sharma You raised an awesome toast to Hasmukh Mehta's praise for you. Thank you. 18 mins · Unlike · 2

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2015

welcome Rohani Daud, and Kavari Yadav like this.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2015

Rameysh Chaand With dreams written in the sky my dear mother, sisters, wife, friends and all motherly divine soar high...with the wings of faith the love lit dreams await in the sky. 16 mins · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 April 2015

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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