Smash The Wall Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Smash The Wall

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It is fact
With single act
That makes new world
With your fold

Yet strong man
May make you human
Ready for encounter
And make it power centre

You may submit
And really greet
With no concern
For participation

You shall enjoy
With enormous joy
The extreme limit
To feel it fit

I shall loose control
With sweet call
Willingly to fall
And smash the wall

Tuesday, May 13, 2014
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Smol Mad Rad Cat 13 May 2014

Really nice rhythm!

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Ambiguous but nice Shruti RJM11 minutes ago Short and sharp. The twist in the end is very appealing.

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It is fact With single act

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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