Hidden Soul

Rookie (May Second / Missouri)

Smile? - Poem by Hidden Soul

'Smile.'
Said the girl.

''Smile?
How am I to smile?
I've lost everything.
Everyone..
Him.'


'Smile.'

'Smiling is forgotten.
To smile is to bring pain.
Why would I bring pain to myself?
Why? ..'


'Smile?
How pathetic..
How pathetic am I? '

'I can't even smile,
not with out reminder.
Smile...
How can I smile?
Please...
Someone make me smile..'


Comments about Smile? by Hidden Soul

  • Romeo Della Valle (9/10/2011 11:42:00 PM)

    Your beauty radiates through your sad but honest well penned write! Where you are right now, I was many time but I learned the hard and painful ways that whenever there is an end, there is a new beginning and the time to move on shall soon arrive! Do you think my dear that you are the only one with a broken heart? Please, read some of my poems and you will soon see how many broken hearts I went through and I survived everyone of them! A superman? Not, just a simple lovable human being IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS (my poem) Your short sad poem shows clearly your great feelings and poetic talent! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ... (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 5, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, September 6, 2011


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