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Smile

Rating: 4.0
Through the Tall, Dark Oak and Pine tress.
On to the side of the mountains, into the valley of Forgiveness.
With the shyness of Romance, and with the soft touch of the breeze.
sacrifice thy purity of thy soul, within her heart.
exist a hint of smile on her face.
Thursday, March 15, 2012
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Louis Cecile 17 March 2012
Quite a good build up to lead to the last line of poem. Good descriptions and the pacing and length work well.
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