Smile Like Those Cherry-Bounded Snow Poem by daughter of a seafoam

Smile Like Those Cherry-Bounded Snow



Through punches of keys,
we have read each other.
Eyes,
touching through whispers,
in a distance.

Sometime, in that distance,
I have seen snow,
bounded by two cherries - a delight!
Causing butterflies to rumble,
and rains to go their way.

The same wilted cherries,
now, muted by tongues,
that created unmelodic words.
Piercing through ears that could break
even a rose to its prince.

Now-
I am a dream
locked in deep sleep.
A striked out word
that could have completed
a beautiful sentence.

Somewhere, still,
in that distance,
lurk the lost whispers
of eyes touching each other.
Where certain cherry-bounded snow haunts-
with delight.

Sunday, October 22, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: rains,snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vilma Xelin 18 September 2007

words that express feelings are artistic... if someone doesn't understand that, is cause they are not reading from their heart... I love this poem! I could feel it! Thanks for sharing!

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Sue Ann Simar 29 October 2006

Lyrical. If the language were a little more precise, I think you would increase the poetic quality and the imagery. Precise may not be the right work. A little tighter or more concise......you have the gift and your own mindset already, you only need to reel it in.

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