Loving Like Tissue Poem by daughter of a seafoam

Loving Like Tissue

Rating: 4.0


I love you like tissue,
removing dirt, absorbing
the wetness dripping
and excreting  burying them within me.
Contented on wiping your unpleasantness,
on waiting for the bin to touch me,
to crumple and rot,
as I float
with trash.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rommel Filoteo 30 October 2007

Nicely penned. love it a lot....

0 0 Reply
Red Blooded Black Hearted 23 September 2007

Great write. Loved the words used. Keep writing.

0 0 Reply
Goldy Locks 17 September 2007

like driftwood. keep on SusxGLx

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success