Saturday, May 3, 2008

Smile Now, Cry Later Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lie awake in the middle of the night
Rehearsing the speech that would have made things right.
All I wanted was a second chance,
The moment suspended and slipped from my hands.
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Jason Summers
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Maria Isabel Oropeza 19 May 2008

not only do i like the depth of this poem, but i like how you make it flow and i can see this situation happening in my head. tears are still in my eyes from reading this poem. this truly is a work of art! all the very best! Lizzy

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Tyease Collins 03 May 2008

Now i know what you mean. It's good that you finished the whole thing. It really is a deep poem that made me want to cry slightly because of how he felt in the poem but how he still was able to smile (he I mean you of course) I love it, Tyease

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Tyease Collins 03 May 2008

wow this poem is deep. I sincerely love it and its one of my favorites. God Bless, Tyease

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