Smoke If You Wish Poem by ivor or ivor.e hogg

Smoke If You Wish

Rating: 5.0


I love the banter and the flow
of witticisms to and fro.
When friends foregather for a while
to raise a glass or two and smile.
The group may be a motley crew
but all good friends both old and new.
Who really can participate
in some good humoured deep debate.
Although the subject’s serious
the comments can be humorous
They say that life’s too short to be
taken completely seriously.
We re not politically correct.
Nor ever will be I suspect.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Thad Wilk 14 December 2007

An interesting debate i'm sure! Good write Ivor! ! ! *10*! Thad

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Ian Bowen 14 December 2007

Ivor, this flowed like a silver springting stream. I would however, if I had composed it, have changed the last line to read: 'Nor I suspect, will we ever be.' Hope you take my suggested edit with good heart.

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Hebburn.Co Durham U.K
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