Tuesday, November 15, 2016

Smoking Fire Comments

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Where fire is, smoke will soon come,
But when they notice the smoke, the fire'll be long gone.

Shredding my heart, it raged through my body,
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Deadly Psycho
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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2016

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.

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Sister Frances 15 November 2016

Very well written.. I like the way the poem starts off with you fully engaged and how you slowly distance yourself, till it becomes nothing..seeing the power, of the devils rage, I blinked at my book, and turned the page. That is my interpretation every reader will see things differently. Keep sharing

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