Snail Dream Poem by Paul Hartal

Snail Dream

Rating: 5.0


A lonely cloud
dims the moonlight. The snail dreams
it can fly like birds.

Monday, October 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,animals,dream,fantasy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 09 October 2018

I have been told that I am as slow as a snail So, I tried this, but it didn't work. Anyway, thanks for your thoughtful poetic help and understanding.!

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Paul Hartal 10 October 2018

Thank you for your feedback, Sandra. Best wishes.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 October 2018

The snail dreams can fly high with lonely cloud. An interesting poem is very brilliantly penned.10

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