Monday, March 30, 2020

Snow Mountain Comments

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No one knew how it came to be
Even to the scientists it was a mystery.
In the summer months where everything turned green
Except for Snow Mountain where nothing but snow
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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 March 2020

A well imaginative poem has been delineated by you having thrilling expression. Here I want to cite some impressive lines...viz, They leave the mountain with a new outlook on life / With much less worries, struggles and strife. / Snow Mountain memories will glitter like the glitter of gold / It is a treasure they want to hold. Fantastic work.

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