snowy dawn...
bits of yesterday
cling to today
Third Place
inaugural Janice M Bostok International Haiku Award
Judges' Comments (by Jim Kacian and Cynthia Rowe)
This ties the natural world with the human - we drag the dream world into the day with us, for a bit, even as our waking obscures that other "real" world we inhabit. At the same time, snow covers what we knew of the outside, but we recognizes it's still there, beneath the covering, evidenced by its shapes
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem