So Acute Was My Loneliness Comments

very heartfelt and intense write...wonderfully written..loved it..10

A ray of light is always there no matter how gloomy your surroundings are. Nice work.

Maybe it was the acuteness of your lonliness that sharpened your pencil to write such a great poem on the subject.We all carry a certain amount of lonliness around with us anyway but we keep it safely locked away. Now and then we have a good cry-for a brief moment and we return that personal file to its place in our memory again.

This poem really pulled on my heartstrings. The title alone says so much, and the images followed are very pensive, and yet so strong they develop the poem deeper into despair. I felt relief in the last stanza. Great writing Rani. 10 Karin Anderson

sadness but a great write

it's wonderful poem... So acute was my loneliness that was far Too far; .................................................................................. The sun would shine tomorrow and I would become myself again. ...................................................................................................... And this the phrase gives rise to hope not only in you, in the readers heart too... 10..... Best Wishes, Tsira

Rani this piece is strong, sad and wistful..... yet the final line contains a positive thought for future time - - you have with this affected the heart of the reader with melancholy - and this alone is sign of a great gem of a poem - - an inspired write.... and first rate reading......10 + + + Fay